Random thought: comma splice

I received this fortune in a fortune cookie today:

“Your mind is filled with new ideas, explore them.”

Now, this is a tricky comma splice because the second half of the sentence lacks a subject. The phrase “explore them” is actually in imperative mood, or what we might call “command form.” The subject (you) is said to be understood, thus making the second half an independent clause, and thus making the use of a comma insufficient.

Other options:

Add a coordinating conjunction:

  • Your mind is filled with new ideas, so explore them.

Use a semicolon:

  • Your mind is filled with new ideas; explore them.

Make two sentences:

  • Your mind is filled with new ideas. Explore them.

Random thought: double spacing

“[Administrative Law] Judges should avoid double-spacing their decisions. Double-spacing gives decisions a draft-like appearance and makes them unnecessarily long. Using smaller line-space increments (1.1 or 1.2) creates an open, easier to read, appearance.”

Michael H. Frost & Paul A. Bateman, Writing Deskbook for Administrative Judges: An Introduction 66 (Carolina Academic Press 2010).